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Hi Sam!! Your cover letter looks great! I especially love how you utilized your skills from non-nursing roles and connected them to how they will make you a good nurse. I think this will definitely make you stick out from other applicants.
There is not much to comment on because it is overall pretty good! I would just say that it does not follow the 4-paragraph model. Maybe you can combine the two smaller paragraphs into one! I also see that you stated you had clinical experiences at the organization you are applying for. This makes you stick out because you are familiar with the organization. To add a bit more personalization, I recommend that you state why you loved being at this organization and how it would be an honor to work there!
Keep up the good work!
Hi Sam,
I really liked how you mentioned skills from previous job experiences and how they would help you in your nursing career. Nice job using your clinical experience to make connections to the job you are applying for. The only suggestion I have would be to combine the two smaller paragraphs to stick to the 4 paragraph model and mention MMC’s mission and/or values. Great job !