UNE Nursing Student

Month: October 2019 (Page 2 of 2)

Revision Reflection #1

When constructing my essay, I first met with Vic because I knew that I usually struggle with creating outlines. She helped me figure out what my thesis statement was and helped me figure out what things I really wanted to explain in my body paragraphs. I used the two prewriting activities, cluster and timeline, which helped me brainstorm specific learning experiences that I have had and helped me pick which ones were the most important and the best examples to put into my essay. This was much different than my usual steps because I never do any pre writing activities and I struggle with deciding what to put into my outline. The pre writing activities really helped me figure out what I was going to specifically be writing about. The writing strategy that was called the web I did not do because I knew that I wasn’t specifically going to be talking about one person that helped me in my learning experiences because I was going to be talking about multiple people. I am really satisfied with my final draft because I spent a lot of time editing my draft and made it the best that I could make it.

When we actively read the texts from Bain and Dweck we were trying to understand what the different learning styles were and what they meant. With our reflective learning essays, I feel as though we analyzed the information from Bain and Dweck about different learning styles and mindsets before we even knew that we would have to write a paper on it. Then everyone evaluated which aspects of the learning styles and mindsets we have experienced in our pasts. After figuring that out, we all created a paper explaining our experiences and comparing it to the pieces of writing. The podcast was also a creating piece because we used the essay that was already created to make something completely new.

Podcasts Elements

Baby Talk: Decoding The Secret Language Of Babies by Hidden Brain

https://www.npr.org/2019/09/30/765855335/baby-talk-decoding-the-secret-language-of-babies

In this podcast the reader discussed how babies learn and communicate. They used a lot of music and background music to captivate their audience and make it so it wasn’t just voices that the listener hears. They also played a lot of baby talk to explain how the babies communicate. They added a quote from a woman but she read the quote which provided a new voice in the podcast. The background music was varied and changed every few minutes and added to the variety of noise. They also added in the interview style and interviewed a woman that worked at a daycare and experienced how babies and toddlers communicate. A Beauty and the Beast song was added in which was cool to listen to because I knew the words and made the podcast more interesting.

Critique Reflection #1

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I liked that we did a self review before the peer review because it helped me really look at my work and see it broken up in sections of the different topics that I wrote about. I have never really done a self review before and just relied on the comments of my peer reviews. Looking back on my work helped me have a better outlook on my peer review comments because I was already thinking of changing some of the same things that my peers suggested to me.

With the peer reviewing I liked having the structure to leave comments because sometimes I struggle with finding things to comment on. The structure for peer reviewing served as a good reminder on the things we are supposed to be commenting about.

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